How to Rewrite "The Secret" to Make it Reflect Reality

I've pondered writing this article, I didn't want to messto be Rich."
up my "The Secret" mojo.Let's Rewrite These Ads.
See we all are magnets - whatever we put out intoDo you really think the Universe gives a hoot about
the universe we get back?whether or not you drive a Porsche or a Pinto?
We read a book, or watch a TV show on "the secret"Do you have a hard time buying that simply believing
or the "law of attraction" and we realize that get backyou are entitled to be rich is going to make it so?
exactly what we put out into the Universe right? WeWe all know that business and life takes hard work.
send out good vibes, we take positive steps todayWe also are aware that no body is just going to wake
and we reap the rewards tomorrow.up tomorrow and fork us over a cool half-million dollars
I'm sorry, I've got a problem with this whole thing. Andjust because we want it. Chris Gardner's character in
the purpose of this article is not to disprove the "law of"The Pursuit of Happiness" portrays this; Garner had to
attraction," it's to expose those who seek to profitwork hard to become a multi-millionaire and he was
from the hype around the "law of attraction."twice as smart as me, so what chance do I have?
"The Secret" is a prickly subject for me. In a worldBecoming is a process, it's a constant re-evaluation of
where we have wars being waged that no onewhere you are, where you are going, where you want
knows about, children being de-limbed for diamonds,to be, and how you are doing it. There are rich bad
AIDS epidemics, nationally funded starvation, childpeople everywhere, there are bad people having fun
murder and rape, and all the other atrocities humansputting positive vibes into the good people's universe.
inflict upon themselves, we have a segment of theWhat does that mean, that bad people get rewarded
population spouting off about how if you can justjust like the rest of us saps?
visualize a better life for yourself the universe willI don't think so, if there is a "secret" "law of attraction" it
respond to create that vision.is that money is not a good indicator of whether or not
Do a Google search for "the secret" or "the law ofyou are living your life by the guidelines of "the secret"
attraction" and your browser will be flooded withand that's no secret. So next time you see pictures
sponsored ads for "Millionaire Business System,"from Sierra Leone of a 4 year old girl hopping around
"Attract Wealth Today," "Learn how to Apply Theon one leg ask yourself if she has watched "The
Secret Principles," and my personal favorite "ChooseSecret," maybe you can send her your copy.